Monday, November 9, 2009

Leilah's Crit

Hi Leilah,

So, I think the many elements in this piece work together in an interesting way. The powerpoint presentation with the laugh track and images, the skull images and skulls and anti-war pin. There is something about all these elements are meant to be entertaining... However, you MUST take more control over your presentation. Using the whiteboard and room projector seems too unconsidered. Also, for this to become a multimedia installtion there has to be more, well, media. More skulls, more images ... I would like to see this installation cover a room.

SL

1 comment:

  1. The relationship between objects and projected images are a bit strained. However, the contents of the slideshow are working well within the anti-war vein. The text about not condoning torture and then condoning torture: all effective.

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